A sonnet is truly a writing challenge. This is the first one I ever wrote, and no doubt, the last. Life Tide first appeared in Leaves in November 2021. I hope you enjoy it again.
Life Tide
These hours, unbound by clocks, my thoughts fly free
from care and debt, from haste and stifled rage.
Lift this gloom, you drowsy, rolling sea!
This weight, this dreadful drag of flesh and age!
—
Here sighs the salt-marsh grass, yet I the more
for blesséd rest and honey-sweet repose.
I nod and fade on this pine-ragged shore,
as sun-swooned cats on door sills lightly doze,
—
with thoughts of rodents lame and flightless birds.
A bunch-grass bed now takes me to a dream —
each ghost, each passing beam, now softly blurred,
obscured by rocky floor and tidal stream.
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Great!!
Poetry was never my forte ... and when I tried once (as an elective) I was shot out of the sky by the machine guns of a VERY disagreeable instructor (one of only two of the kind from AA to MA). That being said I can appreciate the tempo, meaning, and backdrop of poetic expression and yours made me think about far too complicated issues churning in my confused, angry, and, at the same time, already surrendered brain. Fine sensitive sweet job.... Congrats!