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Jim Cummings's avatar

How sad for them whose way is blocked,

by fence and gate, by rusty lock.

Access denied, forest and stream,

a meadow nap, a summer dream.

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AnnieKate Nicholson-Phillips's avatar

Ooo, Sharron. I LOVE number 2 and 5 in particular. Here's my response to your prompt.

It seemed like a playful gate, with its peaked “roof” over the half barrel-shaped lintel, bounded on left and right by wings. There was a road crossing close behind the gate: a choice of two directions, left or right, but brambles with thorns blocked the way straight ahead into the country. Outside the gate, golden trees stood as noble standards, left and right. However, the trees beyond the gate were gray and some bare of leaves. For all its playfulness, it seemed a false invitation to levity. And indeed, the rusty lock on the chain which slithered through the bars of the gate was intended to keep me out. But I in my ghostly form, walked right in.

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