Love Rise
He waited in the boat house, knowing she'd come... A ONE-MINUTE STORY
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He waited for her in the boathouse. He knew she’d come. Under a pale morning sky, he watched her walk out to the dock, and in that delicate light, she was the most beautiful creature he had ever seen. What he felt for her just at that moment, could scarcely be contained.
When she knelt down to untie the small boat, he quietly came up behind her and softly stroked the back of her neck. She turned and let out a high, piercing scream.
He assumed it was the mating song of her species, and echoed it back as best he could. Then he wrapped his tentacles gently around her and whisked her away to his Nest.
*Sunrise photo by Peter Garver, courtesy of Julie Gabrielli at Building Hope
In 58 seconds you took me from serenely peaceful to totally freaked out!
What lurks in that sweet mind of yours behind that soft voice?!
I hope you do more voice overs. I really enjoyed hearing your words float off the page.
This was sooooo good. I was literally waiting for more. Your voice is perfect for the story. It gives it that much more of a suspense. Without it, I would have probably got another feel. Thank you even though I was a little scared. 🤭