Yes, Ron, I see now that 50 words were not enough to tell this particular story... Sometimes WE know what we mean, but the readers do not. I'll keep trying.
For a fifty-word story, it tells what you need with that little twist you're so famous for. It would make an interesting short story, but then again ... that might take the mystery out of it.
I’m in the “days are long” stage of parenting but I’m trying to soak it all in. It’s exhausting and I wouldn’t want it any other way. Someday I know I’ll look back wishing for just a little more time.
Imagine a world in which parenting lasts only 3 years!
For most non-human animals, that's how long it lasts- or less....
After the fact, it seem like my parenting years were very short. There are a few things i would like do-overs on, however.
This is a strange one, Sharron. Wonder what might be the back story.
Yes, Ron, I see now that 50 words were not enough to tell this particular story... Sometimes WE know what we mean, but the readers do not. I'll keep trying.
Interesting Sharron, I had to read this one a few times.
This one was a fail, Kathleen. My fault for not proving enough information here. Sorry!
No need to apologize.
Who says aliens aren't real? 🤣
Some of my best friends are aliens, Mark. True!
I'm shrugging, because, well, because....
Yes, poop!. This story did not hit the mark. Too little info. Aw well, win some, lose some! Sorry, Jill
When you're in the thick of parenting, it seems to last forever. When they are grown and independent it seems it was the blink of an eye.
It really does. My story was half-baked, I admit, but still inspired some thought.
I took it as a well crafted bit of symbolism.
And that is precisely why I adore you. ha ha ha
those ethereal creatures ... at it again. And he/it looked so innocent and maybe a little boring.
I liked where this story was going, but I should have worked on it a few more days... Too much plot and not enough setting / character development...
For a fifty-word story, it tells what you need with that little twist you're so famous for. It would make an interesting short story, but then again ... that might take the mystery out of it.
I’m in the “days are long” stage of parenting but I’m trying to soak it all in. It’s exhausting and I wouldn’t want it any other way. Someday I know I’ll look back wishing for just a little more time.
Oh, I have no doubt! But then, if you are lucky-- grandchildren!
I read it twice. I’d like to know more on that world. Sounds interesting.!
Thank you, Yael, for your encouragement. I am thinking I just might want to do that. It is a tale worth telling…
Oooh. Love this one. Perfectly sized. Perfectly mysterious. 💜💜
I got mixed reviews on this one. I may try it again as a full page rather than 50 words. I like the concept, but felt it was too thin.
Nice to know you can always reshape it. But the premise is divine.
There is a powerful message in there, though. I felt her pain.
Thanks, Janice! Always experimenting, any way. ha ha ha
Well, at least she was spared the anguish of her son's teen years.
Ha ha ha! Or at least the teen years may only have lasted one week in this case.
Hey, you're right. I forgot about compression of time in this case.:)
Extraordinary, Sharron! The images, of course, are wonderful and truly enhance this story. I especially like the "crooked crucifix." Chilling! xo
Thanks! Yes, I thought that cross was a nice touch. ha ha ha