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Hmm. Perhaps she will find a home with Eizer and his friends, too.

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Stay tuned...seven more chapters. You never know, Janice.

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Oct 19, 2022Liked by Sharron Bassano

My parents lived in Bakersfield for a year or so back in the early 1980s, so I always remember the ambiance, and the intense heat!

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An unusual city with its own distinct character. Just the name, Bakersfield, conjures up a feel, a smell, vision. And it can be hotter than blazes!

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Beautifully written, Sharron. The scene is atmospheric and very descriptive. I felt like I was in the barroom for the duration of this chapter!

Hmmm…I may have to click on the “introduction” link now… 😉

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A sad story. Hopefully she can turn her life around.

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Some people get second chances. Thanks, Mark.

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