El Dorado County, 1949 - But where will he sleep?
Good dialogue between the characters, and I'm always impressed with the quality of the structure of each descriptive sentence!
Thank you for this comment, Linda. I always chide myself for over-editing, but some times... just sometimes, it pays off.
I really like this story. The pics and photos work great with the prose! Most excellent!
Wow! Thank you James for having a look at Bartle Clunes. It is a bit of nostalgia ca 1949 in the foothills of California. Not for everyone, but it says what I wanted it to say. I hope you enjoy the dialect and the family of characters.
You have really brought these characters to life. Well done, Sharron.
There is so much fiction out there vying for your attention. I am honored you have chosen to find out who Bartle Clunes is.
It is hard to choose. But your first chapter hooked me. 🤓
Hooray!
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Good dialogue between the characters, and I'm always impressed with the quality of the structure of each descriptive sentence!
Thank you for this comment, Linda. I always chide myself for over-editing, but some times... just sometimes, it pays off.
I really like this story. The pics and photos work great with the prose! Most excellent!
Wow! Thank you James for having a look at Bartle Clunes. It is a bit of nostalgia ca 1949 in the foothills of California. Not for everyone, but it says what I wanted it to say. I hope you enjoy the dialect and the family of characters.
You have really brought these characters to life. Well done, Sharron.
There is so much fiction out there vying for your attention. I am honored you have chosen to find out who Bartle Clunes is.
It is hard to choose. But your first chapter hooked me. 🤓
Hooray!