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Linda Brown's avatar

Some nice characters, here!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Oh, thank you, Linda. Now we are almost finished... I will miss these good people.

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Janice Walton's avatar

I could just feel their pain - beautifully written.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Eizer sure loves that little boy. I will do everything I can to bring him back. I am the only one who can do it. haha. Thanks Janice for sticking with Bartle Clunes.

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Janice Walton's avatar

That's true - you hold the power.

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James Ron's avatar

Well, I'm glad Eli is back with Eizer. Hope Merlene goes to Eizer eventually. Doesn't look too good for her right now.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Such a happy reunion. But poor little Merlene... I can't tell you how happy I am that you are enjoying my story, James. It means a lot.

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Good for Eli and Eizer. Not so sure about Merlene. She won’t find help in a tavern.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Well, no, she won't, poor thing. Some children raised with alcoholism become drinkers themselves. Others rebel against it and rise to a different world. Who's to say why? Thank you, Mark

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Mark Starlin's avatar

So true.

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