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Again, a sweet snippet into this era that shows all the hard work it took to create a loving community.

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Thanks Linda. I am feeling a little wistful as Bartle Clunes is approaching its end. What is going to happen to all those sweet people! I will miss them. I secretly hope there is a book two.. but I don't know.

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Sharron,

I love the image, busier than a moth in a mitten, and the original way you express yourself. I can't wait to gift your book to others this year once it's out.

-Marina

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Thanks, Marina, your comments are always so welcome. I am including a message in the last four chapter headings about possible availability of a hard copy of Bartle Clunes to see if anyone else would be interested. In any case, I will get information and print a few for you if I can after November 12. Update soon.

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Oh no! I will certainly miss reading about all the people in Riles Crossing every Saturday. . . and will keep my fingers crossed for the possibility of a Book 2..

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I wrote this little story for my mother when she was in the 97th ( and last ) year of her life. I wrote a chapter a day and read it to her. She was a little addled, but asked for it every day - sometimes more than once, and listened carefully. I think she thought Riles Crossing and its residents were real. It WAS real to us, and a beautiful connection in the days of her dying.

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What a lovely memory and beautiful connection for both of you. I wonder if the story brought back memories for her. Due to the dementia, Dan lived in different chapters of his life. For a long time, it was the street where we lived as teens. I knew the people and was able to help him with sort out the memories.

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Yes, I believe the story did bring back memories. I intentionally included many icons from the forties and fifties, because I knew she would remember ( Spam, Nehi cola, wood burning cookstove, Jello salad, old Ford sedan, etc.) I understand what you mean by reliving different chapters of Dan's life.

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Nehi orange was Dan's favorite when he was a kid. I remember reading that in the story now. What a gift you gave your mother.

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I remember drinking Nehi grape soda as a kid and running around with a purple "mustache". I hadn't thought about that for long time.

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I know we are nearing the end of the story. I will miss these folks. My wife has finished the book and has thoroughly enjoyed it. She's on to Katy I believe.

We may have had the same history book - I remember the Indians teaching the Colonists how to plant maize/corn using a fish for fertilizer. I hope it wasn't history rewritten. : )

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James, I cannot tell you enough how pleased I am that you and your wife enjoyed reading Bartle Clunes. It feels the same as if someone admired my child! I do think you will enjoy the Katy stories, too. Even if you never lived on a farm., even if you never traveled the heartland. She was a brave and resourceful woman.

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A fish garden! That would be a sight.

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My grandmother actually did plant her beans and corn together and we helped her. Those were loooong days for us two kids. But we never expected the fish to sprout.

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There is always hope. 🤣

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Alegria!

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Thank you, Jill!

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