A joy to read. Grounded . A feast for the soul and possible flying fish that do leap over the waves, but I believe they are being chased by bigger fish for food. That’s another tale.
You would not be far off. I WAS a teacher of English to adult immigrants for many years. But parts of me are also in Louvina, Bartle, old Eizer Griggs and poor little Merlene. DO you think we write what we know and what we have lived in most cases?
Good! It was a quick view into the personalities of several of the characters who live in Riles Crossing. And the tone, as always, is one of kindness. You will not find a thrill a minute in Bartle Clunes, but you will find a quiet, calm oasis to visit for a few minutes in this frantic age we live in. A nice little break.
Yes. Just to slow down and breathe. I think Bartle Clunes should be bottled and taken in small doses every day, like a tonic. Thank you Jim for taking a second look.
Thank you, Jill, for reading from Bartle Clunes. I am so glad you enjoyed your quick "visit" to the California foothills. It is a story that is very meaning-full to me and it's such a pleasure to know you found some worth to it. Happy day to you!
Educating children in their surroundings about everyday life. What a concept! I had a teacher/writer/publisher friend from India who conducted star gazing events with his sixth grade class. He commented in his newspaper column that all he needed to give his students an education superior to what was offered in the top schools in the district was a blackboard and a few tables and benches.
A joy to read. Grounded . A feast for the soul and possible flying fish that do leap over the waves, but I believe they are being chased by bigger fish for food. That’s another tale.
Thank you, Richard , for reading this small part of an unusual tale. Unusual for 2024, anyway. I am glad you have found some value in it.
Kind people. We need more of those. Put 'em on the list.
And, if you can't find any of those kinds of people, just invent them! They do become real after a while. At least for me. Thanks, Kate.
I always feel wholesome after reading some of Bartle Clunes. Would I be far off, Sharron, thinking you and Vida Lee have much in common?
You would not be far off. I WAS a teacher of English to adult immigrants for many years. But parts of me are also in Louvina, Bartle, old Eizer Griggs and poor little Merlene. DO you think we write what we know and what we have lived in most cases?
We write what we know from experiences and how many times we tripped over our untied shoelaces until we stop to tie the knot or buy a pair of loafers.
I do think it provides a foundation. It is what we can touch. After that, what is written, or built, can go in almost any direction.
I love the Bartle Clunes stories. I feel like I have read this one before. Or am I just too familiar with the characters? 🤣 A fine read either way.
Mark, you are so kind. If my memory serves, you read the entire book and commented on each chapter as I posted them. I was touched by your tenacity!
I did read them all. It was a pleasure.
What an opening…. Gripping. I love your metaphors…. Reminds me of my roots in the south. Heartwarming story. Great start to my day.
Good! It was a quick view into the personalities of several of the characters who live in Riles Crossing. And the tone, as always, is one of kindness. You will not find a thrill a minute in Bartle Clunes, but you will find a quiet, calm oasis to visit for a few minutes in this frantic age we live in. A nice little break.
But I still believe in Santa Claus. :).
And yes, I'm serious about that.
To you, Olga, and all others filled with childlike wonder, all dreams are possible.
Childhood! Learning something every day! Magic❤️
Always refreshing to take a quick trip back to the foothills.
Yes. Just to slow down and breathe. I think Bartle Clunes should be bottled and taken in small doses every day, like a tonic. Thank you Jim for taking a second look.
I adore your 'fish' stories! You've got such a talent. I love the flavor of your writing.
Thank you, Jill, for reading from Bartle Clunes. I am so glad you enjoyed your quick "visit" to the California foothills. It is a story that is very meaning-full to me and it's such a pleasure to know you found some worth to it. Happy day to you!
Educating children in their surroundings about everyday life. What a concept! I had a teacher/writer/publisher friend from India who conducted star gazing events with his sixth grade class. He commented in his newspaper column that all he needed to give his students an education superior to what was offered in the top schools in the district was a blackboard and a few tables and benches.
Ah yes... blackboard, tables, benches, and it helps to love your work and to love kids! Thanks KC for your comments. Much appreciated.