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I hope that people read my stories and feel good and know the world is good, even though it seems bad.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Such a good question, Sharron. Btw I missed seeing posts from you the last few days. In your writing, you’re definitely doing a good!

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

What a completely lazy man. He took the early way out, looking pitiful the whole time. The perfect professional "poor me".

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Your challenge to us all in the ending was perfectly set up by the story of Sydney. Thank you!

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An interesting question, Sharron. Once we are gone, we don't know what people remember us for. We no longer exist. So rather than trying to do something that people will remember us for, maybe we could just do kind things in the present moment and enjoy that bit of serotonin that comes from that.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

“Spoiler Alert!”

Just kidding, Sharron!

Self sacrifice is an ingredient in many a great drama. I’m reminded of Les Miserables, another French setting, where self sacrifice abounds.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Thank you for the inspiration, Sharron. Sometimes it seems there is little we can do to change the big picture but we have to start somewhere.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Sharon, the concluding paragraph of this story hit me like a mortar bomb. Ever since my day of destruction in 2019 I've struggled with fears that I brought that catastrophe on myself by being too unobservant and lazy. The thought continues to pursue me especially as I struggle to get some sleep every night. I gotta get a copy of this book asap.... Thanks again for writing what invariably triggers serious thinking... Super job.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Yours is the only fiction I read. There's only time for the technical tomes now, and learning the orignal languages to get the right intent. There was no required reading in school except the standard texts. Plenty enough of those to lug around. I suspect the younger mind is affected differently than the "nearly antique". Glad ya liked it.)))

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Good question! Hopefully, my tombstone will say "she cared."

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Well said. It is the way we live and love that is our greatest legacy.

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Mar 13Liked by Sharron Bassano

Wow - really, really powerful, Sharron! Excellent analysis and application for us all.

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Mar 14Liked by Sharron Bassano

That's a great story; I never read that book, but it feels like a whole lot of application now. We all need some grace for each other these days and sometimes for ourselves. Thanks always, Sharron!

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Dickens at his best, beginning and ending this work.

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