Wow! Barrie I would just love that. Using these as a prompt, you could post your part three on Encourage Meant, with a link to my first two parts. I could write a part three, too and see if I can get a couple others and post them on Leaves all together. What do you think?
.. great storytelling .. never a surprise .. & the charm & truth of the scenario - certainly familiar to myself .. though ‘spontaneity is my meagre superpower & ‘obsession is just a cheap perfume
It’s fun.. a lotta fun.. you have a nasty ‘morality streak that can’t be beat .. been kinda hectic.. so nice to have time - to read & ‘play in my visual head - within the two scenarios !
‘respect to her .. but ‘he’s an embarrassment.. oh deary me ! Or a ‘threat ! 🦎🏴☠️🔥
Urp. Really? I thought it was finished. I mean, I am sure there IS a part three, I just don't know if it will reveal itself. You know how that is. Do you think there will ever be a next chapter of The Loyalty Bar? We all loved that story so much.
Coffee clutch club. The ring not noticed. Who says it s a gold wedding ring? Maybe a jewel, a birth done or significant something. You’ve got to take us to here and there Sharron.
Sea Quells the Restless: Me! Sometimes I'd like the next part and sometimes I just pretend its already there. Liminal Space available. Imagination hiked up. And Anticipation wins yet again (but will it win the next time?) Maybe I expect you to write, but it's great that you've started the imagination at an extraordinary pace...
Whoa, you slipped in a dandy complicating factor at the end. Heartache ahead. I enjoyed the initial awkward back and forth when she joins him at his table. Well done, Sharron.
I confess, I didn't think of a ring until I looked closer at the photo. You know all about stock fiction! Those pictures really tell the story. Thank you, Meg
Eek, twisty turn’s bit at the end … lush, I reckon there’s a part 3!
Ah... there is always a next part in real life. I am sure these two have a part three.... now if I can just find out what it is...
I shall have a think about it and see if there’s a part 3 at the end of my pen … the perfect prompt to try that romance I was musing about!
Wow! Barrie I would just love that. Using these as a prompt, you could post your part three on Encourage Meant, with a link to my first two parts. I could write a part three, too and see if I can get a couple others and post them on Leaves all together. What do you think?
Let me put my thinking cap on. It’s a ‘Jusr Write, Right’ sort of challenge, for sure.
Just Write, Right, not Encourage Meant. Yes, sorry I mixed up the sections.
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Sharron, I'm hooked. Line and sinker, waiting for the net. - Jim
Darn it.... now what have got myself into. I thought this story was finished...
Oh you little tease! 😁 So he's wearing a ring, is he? And .....? I can hardly wait.
Well, he wasn't wearing a ring when I started this story! I just happened to notice it in the photograph...
Oh, the discoveries continue on both sides of the page. (writer/reader)
Love it. Standing by for next episode:)
Okey dokey. I will see what I can learn about these two.... Thanks, VikkiDawn
.. great storytelling .. never a surprise .. & the charm & truth of the scenario - certainly familiar to myself .. though ‘spontaneity is my meagre superpower & ‘obsession is just a cheap perfume
It’s fun.. a lotta fun.. you have a nasty ‘morality streak that can’t be beat .. been kinda hectic.. so nice to have time - to read & ‘play in my visual head - within the two scenarios !
‘respect to her .. but ‘he’s an embarrassment.. oh deary me ! Or a ‘threat ! 🦎🏴☠️🔥
This story could go anywhere... Thanks, Timber.
Oh, Sharron. We're gonna need to hear more about that ring. When is part 3?
Urp. Really? I thought it was finished. I mean, I am sure there IS a part three, I just don't know if it will reveal itself. You know how that is. Do you think there will ever be a next chapter of The Loyalty Bar? We all loved that story so much.
Hmmmnnnnn, quite a twist…. But I know you love a tease. Like the others I’m hoping for part 3.
Well, maybe there is. I don't know. Thanks for reading and commenting, Wade!
I want more more more. I was so into this what's up with the ring?
I hadn't even thought of him being married, until I noticed the ring in the photograph. Sometimes the photo drives the story... Thank you, Kathleen.
Good one, Sharron! That misshapened coffee cup in the photo fits.
Yes! I thought it was a fine little visual metaphor. Thanks!
I wasn't expecting that. . .What now?
I wonder....
Coffee clutch club. The ring not noticed. Who says it s a gold wedding ring? Maybe a jewel, a birth done or significant something. You’ve got to take us to here and there Sharron.
You may be on to something, Richard. Can't tell you yet. ha ha ha. Because I don't know.
Sea Quells the Restless: Me! Sometimes I'd like the next part and sometimes I just pretend its already there. Liminal Space available. Imagination hiked up. And Anticipation wins yet again (but will it win the next time?) Maybe I expect you to write, but it's great that you've started the imagination at an extraordinary pace...
I agree, Jill. I do not like to wrap stories up too neatly. Life is not like that. Sometimes it is best to trust to the imaginations of the readers.
...ignore the ring.... nope. Stop that one right there.
Let's give it the benefit of the doubt -- one more episode, see what happens...
Whoa, you slipped in a dandy complicating factor at the end. Heartache ahead. I enjoyed the initial awkward back and forth when she joins him at his table. Well done, Sharron.
Thanks, Ken. I'd planned to leave this story as it is, but the readers have asked for part 3... what have I started here? ha ha ha
Ride that horse as far as she will go, Sharron.
Oooh, THE RING. Fabulous twist. Loved how you just wedged it in there all neat like it wouldn't throw me for a loop and a half. 😊
I confess, I didn't think of a ring until I looked closer at the photo. You know all about stock fiction! Those pictures really tell the story. Thank you, Meg