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Beautiful, Sharron. Perhaps the spirits believe in you.

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Well put, Jim. I was grappling with a similar comment myself, but couldn't quite make it

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Oh... I hadn't thought of it that way. You are probably right. Thank you, my friend.

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She would be proud of you

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Thank you, Scott. And your mom of you.

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In the summer of 1987, my father, deceased since 1967, stood at the foot of my bed, wearing his trademark British woolen suit, and said: "It's time you to get up... We got to go...." It's a mystery he visited although I do have my suspicions... we never really had a father-son relationship. Ever since that day my life's been a struggle. You're lucky your mother sounds like a warm empathetic mom. I'd kill for parents like her.

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You will have to write more of these family stories, AT. I find the more I talk or write about the problematic people from my past, the less power they have over me.

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I know about those words of wisdom that come from our loved ones and I honor them.

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Yes, you DO know. My mom still lives in my head. How could she not? Thanks Janice. I always appreciate your empathy.

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and my heart.

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Memories and visions are two different things.

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The beauty of this piece is proof that simplicity is frequently more powerful than complexity.

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As they often say, "Sometimes more is just more." The best thing about 50-word stories is that you really have to hone it down to the absolute essence -- good practice for any of us.

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Quite.

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Oh gosh, Sharron. Wonderful, as always.

Afterlife as a 'general' thing is something I feel is pretty hard to relate to - but where it comes to ourselves and the very specific-to-us people we love and memories we treasure, well yes, there's no need for belief. Because look, there they all are. ♥️

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I could not have said it so beautifully. Thank you Rebecca. I wish we were neighbors

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A pleasure, Sharron. And gosh, me too! 😊

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A beautiful story (and beautiful exchange of comments here, too)! Your fifty-word stories linger long after they’ve been read, my friend. A great way to start my day. Thank you.

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Thank you, Justin. I am always so happy to receive your comments. They mean more than you know.

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Very nice, Sharron! Your Mother is not gone. She's in your heart.

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Yes, she is, and will live here until forever. Thanks, James

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Lovely. So much said in so few words. Well done!

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