I like the direction this is heading. Life here seems simple and gentle. The journal gives us some insight into Kathoc's struggles to learn a new language and culture as well as some snippets of his former life. I really like this format. Such a nice world you've created. I'll be interested in how Kathoc bridges the culture gap in his relationship with Iz-La without creating a real conflict. And what will they find in the "place of books?" Keep it going Sharron!
Another excellent installment, Sharron! If this was a book being sold on a shelf somewhere, I’d buy it without hesitation. The flow of the story really works, and it is all being pieced together seamlessly. Can’t wait to read the next installment!
I like the direction this is heading. Life here seems simple and gentle. The journal gives us some insight into Kathoc's struggles to learn a new language and culture as well as some snippets of his former life. I really like this format. Such a nice world you've created. I'll be interested in how Kathoc bridges the culture gap in his relationship with Iz-La without creating a real conflict. And what will they find in the "place of books?" Keep it going Sharron!
Today was my first exposure to Kathoc. Where have I been?
I'm hooked! And...very curious to see what happens as Kathoc's memory continues to return.
Another excellent installment, Sharron! If this was a book being sold on a shelf somewhere, I’d buy it without hesitation. The flow of the story really works, and it is all being pieced together seamlessly. Can’t wait to read the next installment!
Damn, I'm really getting into this Sharron. Keep 'em coming!!!!
Such a good story! Absence, perhaps abstinence, makes the heart grow fonder??