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Scott Ocamb's avatar

Great story, I am glad you made it a happy ending. I liked the technique you used, no traditional dialog.

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Jim Sarasu's avatar

"she hugged me, right there in the market, surrounded by all these piles of fish". I love the irony of the setting - man gulps down delicious bait and gets pulled to face bad consequences. And then, he's miraculously off the hook. What a delectable story!!!

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