None of us born to be corralled! Perfect, if words can be, last line. Your timing for each of your phrases is special. Like being a conscientious objector instead of fighting, just surreptitiously changing the way things are to make a little piece of this world a little more human.
Nice!
👍🏻 Thanks. I appreciated the comments of our writing group before hand.
You got it, Sharron: run free, live free. The first paragraph draws a beautiful picture.
Thanks, KCK! I know nothing about horses, I admit. It was a challenge from Justin Deming that took me off into this unknown territory.
Well, that hit me smack-dab in the sternum.
I thought of Sue Cauhape the whole time I was working on this one. Sue Cauhape, who knows horses, while I, myself, have never patted or sat on one…
🥺😲 Oh Sharron, that must be remedied. If you're ever in the neighborhood .......
Hmmm. Let me think about it. No. ha ha ha
Perfect!
You are so nice, Barrie. I thank you so much for re-stacking! It is so helpful.
Always a pleasure to share your words.
None of us born to be corralled! Perfect, if words can be, last line. Your timing for each of your phrases is special. Like being a conscientious objector instead of fighting, just surreptitiously changing the way things are to make a little piece of this world a little more human.
Thank you, Jillness
A nice metaphor. Run free, wild spirit. But could you stop and get some milk, please?
And a bag of Doritos.
Yummy.
Yay! Thank you.
50 words of pure poetry here - I love this one Sharron!
Thank you , Conor, and thanks to Justin for the prompt! Horses -- something I never thought would figure into one of my stories.
Excellent! I Like it.
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I love this story. It's a 50-word gem.
Yeeeow! Thanks Bill! 🩷
Nor was I - I'm glad they are free, but can they fend for themselves?
Don’t know anything about it. We will have to ask Sue Cauhape of Ring Around the Basin. She knows horses.
"...within the folded and fractured hills." I can see them, Sharron. Well done.
Thanks, my friend!
I could feel the ground shake under the horses hooves.
Thanks, Ron!👍🏻
50 words of perfection! Beautiful, Sharron!
Thank you, my hero. And thanks for the re-stack! It really helps.
I feel that way about orcas too.
Freedom!
Oh, it was the perfect story already, and then BANG - the beyond-perfect last line!
Wonderful, Sharron. Such great writing. x