It is a good goal to keep your living space clean, calm and relaxing. These two ladies did a fine job. Silent, neat, beneficial to everyone..... except the one ))))
Re not needing the details, Sharron - that's what is so absolutely extraordinarily brilliant about your writing - those details supply themselves. You give us just enough for our own imaginations to know exactly. Awesome, awesome job.
Thank you, Pages. This little piece demonstrates that you do not need to write the details of a back story and you do not need a tightly closed ending. The entire story was in this short present-tense fragment.
Ooooooh, I'm so conflicted.... but my coin has landed on the side of Ruth and Shelly for this one! There's more than one kind of justice, right? You go, girls!
Neatness is a virtue. )))
In this case, I'd have to agree. Nice job, ladies.
It is a good goal to keep your living space clean, calm and relaxing. These two ladies did a fine job. Silent, neat, beneficial to everyone..... except the one ))))
Geez, Kate, you could write Yelp reviews! ha ha ha ha
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Sounds as if justice has been served, cold.
Mmm...yes. With fish and salt and not a moment too soon, if you ask me.
Shades of the Chicks song, “Goodbye Earl”.
Oh! I'll check that out. Maybe add it to the post. Thanks
He sleeps with the fishes, where he belongs.
He asked for it. And we don't even need the details.
Re not needing the details, Sharron - that's what is so absolutely extraordinarily brilliant about your writing - those details supply themselves. You give us just enough for our own imaginations to know exactly. Awesome, awesome job.
Thank you, Rebecca, for agreeing with me. I get it right sometimes. And I usually know when I've missed the mark! ha ha h a
Hands brushed off and clean. A service to the community performed.
I got no problem with it, myself.
Somebody taught those sisters how to clean and gut
Fish, of course
Kathleen! Eeuuww!
I like the way your mind works...
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THAT is done-but is it? In deed and clean up perhaps, but in their minds?
UGH. What lingers?
Hard to say, Jill. But liberation is very powerful! Let's hope for the best.
LIBERATION.
yes mental, physical, emotional: we crave it. I wish it for you continually!
Good riddance, I would say!
You are probably right. He sounds quite sinister...
Wonderful writing, and I'm glad you found good use for my photo!
Thanks for letting me feature it, James.
Dispatched: such a civilized euphemism for killed. The opening line is beautifully descriptive writing. Sharron. Perfect ending.
Thank you, Ken
Atmospheric justice … 👌🏻
Ooh, this was really interesting. I was really intrigued! Keep writing, fellow writer!
Thank you, Pages. This little piece demonstrates that you do not need to write the details of a back story and you do not need a tightly closed ending. The entire story was in this short present-tense fragment.
Ooooooh, I'm so conflicted.... but my coin has landed on the side of Ruth and Shelly for this one! There's more than one kind of justice, right? You go, girls!
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