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Jim Cummings's avatar

Wow Sharron,

This gets more and more intriguing. You have developed the setting beautifully, I can picture every detail of the house and the surroundings. The ominous flashing in the night sky, coming closer on succcessive evenings and Hamish's reaction--resigned and maybe not surprised.

The dialect is spot-on.

A little surprise at the end!

You've gotten us down the rabbit hole now. We'll be waiting for more!

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Rebecca Holden's avatar

The intrigue deepens....! And now I'm hungry for turnips - I feel I'm right there, Sharron!

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