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Jim Cummings's avatar

Great, Sharron. You have changed the relationship between Matthew and Lily to a perhaps more realistic one. I am intrigued by the new group consisting of two men and one woman. I'm sure the results will be more exciting to the aliens this time.

Well done, as usual.

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Kate Henry's avatar

YEs better. SEcond batch has a good chance to go home too. but... two men, one woman could make conflict, or she could treat them like her sons. I'd like to see the captors disappointed again and again.

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