I searched for you in small cafés and fog-bound streams - 100 words
Very nice, the feelings expressed in a tone of longing that we have all felt at one point in our lives.
Thank you, Linda.
Beautiful.
Thanks for reading my prose poem, Jim. I don't attempt many.
Ya. That's my darlin' Dan. Through different time zones, we've found each other. I hope all the other times were as happy as this one. )))
Kate Henry -- definitely a romantic soul.
Just beautiful, Sharron! Your words shape a longing for the one who you have carried in your dreams forever, and who now stands before you. *sigh*
Thanks, Gopher Farm girl. And especially for looking at the first draft.
The treasure hunt is over with the shine of a smile that fills the once empty space with a glow of light richness.
One must be tenacious and keep heart.
Sometimes, the search is better than the find. Very nice, Sharron.
Yes, that is what they tell me. ha ha ha. Destinations often disappoint, but the journeys never do.
"Along the pebbled lines of a falling tide." Love that image. Beautiful prose Sharron.
Your voice overs are so expressive too.
Thanks, pal.
Beautifully written. My favorite line is: "along the pebbled lines of a falling tide."
Thank you, KC!
I agree. Romance never leaves the feminine heart.
And I wonder if it ever leaves the male heart; or does it turn to bitterness?
Hmm. I have never thought of that.
I know that feeling!
Yes, Janice. I know you do.
Lovely, Sharron.
I'm with Jim here: "along the pebbled lines of a falling tide." is wonderful.
Thank you for reading my poem, Nathan, and your kind comment.
Lovely, Sharron!
Thanks, John. Probably not your reading preference, but I'm glad you read it! I don't write much poetry, but sometimes a 100-word poem is easier to write than a 100-word story.
I find both to have their own challenges.
Tears in my eyes, Sharron. Your words are beautiful, and guess what, this is one of 'our' songs. One of mine and Jim's. Thank you so much. xxx
I am embarrassed to say I just discovered Johnny Flynn and the Detectorists. I watched all three seasons in five days...
It’s wonderful, isn’t it? We loved it, too!
Lovely!
Thank you, Amie.
A bit of romance you say..maybe more than a bit, romance for anything uplifts not only you, but whatever you are romancing!
Yes!!
Thank you, Jill! Interesting thoughts.
Perfect. Love sees the beauty of the soul.
Very nice, the feelings expressed in a tone of longing that we have all felt at one point in our lives.
Thank you, Linda.
Beautiful.
Thanks for reading my prose poem, Jim. I don't attempt many.
Ya. That's my darlin' Dan. Through different time zones, we've found each other. I hope all the other times were as happy as this one. )))
Kate Henry -- definitely a romantic soul.
Just beautiful, Sharron! Your words shape a longing for the one who you have carried in your dreams forever, and who now stands before you. *sigh*
Thanks, Gopher Farm girl. And especially for looking at the first draft.
The treasure hunt is over with the shine of a smile that fills the once empty space with a glow of light richness.
One must be tenacious and keep heart.
Sometimes, the search is better than the find. Very nice, Sharron.
Yes, that is what they tell me. ha ha ha. Destinations often disappoint, but the journeys never do.
"Along the pebbled lines of a falling tide." Love that image. Beautiful prose Sharron.
Your voice overs are so expressive too.
Thanks, pal.
Beautifully written. My favorite line is: "along the pebbled lines of a falling tide."
Thank you, KC!
Beautiful.
I agree. Romance never leaves the feminine heart.
And I wonder if it ever leaves the male heart; or does it turn to bitterness?
Hmm. I have never thought of that.
I know that feeling!
Yes, Janice. I know you do.
Lovely, Sharron.
I'm with Jim here: "along the pebbled lines of a falling tide." is wonderful.
Thank you for reading my poem, Nathan, and your kind comment.
Lovely, Sharron!
Thanks, John. Probably not your reading preference, but I'm glad you read it! I don't write much poetry, but sometimes a 100-word poem is easier to write than a 100-word story.
I find both to have their own challenges.
Tears in my eyes, Sharron. Your words are beautiful, and guess what, this is one of 'our' songs. One of mine and Jim's. Thank you so much. xxx
I am embarrassed to say I just discovered Johnny Flynn and the Detectorists. I watched all three seasons in five days...
It’s wonderful, isn’t it? We loved it, too!
Lovely!
Thank you, Amie.
A bit of romance you say..maybe more than a bit, romance for anything uplifts not only you, but whatever you are romancing!
Yes!!
Thank you, Jill! Interesting thoughts.
Perfect. Love sees the beauty of the soul.